St Valentines Day
love blooms here
in a special reserved place
etched in my mind
your heartbeat
those days we shared the same bed
© gillena cox 2017
Today's poem is a Cherita [pronounced CHAIR-rita] the Malay word for story or tale, read more about this form HERE
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36 comments:
Those places do get etched in ones mind, Gillena. I kinda shiver when I think about things like that. Etched in my mind.
BTW, I missed you yesterday, you missed me. Happy Birthday!!!
I'm not posting today.
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Thanks for the late birthday greeting, much appreciated. Happy you dropped by Jim
Much love...
I liked the idea of having a reserved place in one's mind for someone.
Thanks for dropping by Frank
much love...
I'm with Frank on this one, Gillena. Love xxx
Awww.... love, love.
Thanks Kim, happy you dropped by
much love...
Thanks for dropping in Marian
much love...
Agree wirh the others about the special place...
Thanks for dropping by Thotpurge
much love...
Lovely, Gillena!
True, abrupt dear etched image. I read it forward and back and so it strummed the tunes in my heart. Thank you.
the use of past tense adds a sad touch to the lines...
A precious memory of togetherness.
The longing in this verse is so sweet and painful to touch. It's a beautifully crafted image. :-)
-HA
Happy you dropped in Rosemary
much love...
Thank you for your appreciation Susan
much love...
Thank you for your appreciation Sumana
much love...
Thanks for dropping in Kerry
much love...
Thank you for your appreciation Anmol
much love...
Whistles!!!❤️💘 Oh I love this - such a wonderfully romantic write, Gillena! Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support❤️💘
Lots of love,
Sanaa
A poem for an ex lover. A little sad that you are still burning a flame( flickering and feint though it may be. )Happy Valentines Day ( belated)Gillena !Nice poem.
I think we all have those memories... really a good memory it seems..
Thanks for dropping in Sanaa
MUCH LOVE...
Happy you dropped in Rall, ❤️💘a poem for my husband❤️💘
much love...
Yup! happy you dropped in Bjorn
much love...
Memories of love are the sweetest.
Yup! thanks for dropping in Sherry
much love...
The poignancy of the past tense is significant in this beautiful poem Gillena.
Thanks for your appreciation Robin
Much love...
Happy you dropped by Janice
Much love...
Nice new form that is convenient to do. Thanks for sharing Gillena!
Hank
Thanks for dropping by Hank
MUCH LOVE...
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