Blue Moon on the wane -
tired sea ripples gently
bathers having left
© gillena cox 2018
SEASON OF EASTER; SUNDAY SMILES
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Poetry Pantry 398
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Haiku My Heart
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Before you leave see also
Sunday Savvy 79
Sunday Lime 79
8 April 2017
Sundays are always special here at Lunch Break. Today is #79 in the series The Sunday Standard when 5-7-5 haiku is featured. email me post a COMMENT or leave a link to your blog at the linky below
49 comments:
Beautiful!💜 Happy Sunday, Gillena 😊
Superbly done Gillena
A beautiful image, Gillena, created in few words to make an oceanic impression!
This is lovely as it reminded me of walking by the sea in the evening and all its bluster and flourish has gone and was gently lapping on the shore not needing to show off to anyone!
Happy you dropped in Jae
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Thank you for your appreciation Kim
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Aha! Robin. Actually, returning home from a wedding last week, and my daughter driving, in a traffic jam, we both had enough time to savour the blue moon losing its roundness over the sea.
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Such a serene image
Lovely to see that blue moon, Gillena.
Beautifully penned, Gillena! Something about that moon!!
Time for quiet reflection. . .Well written! Have a grand day!
Stunning words create stunning images to accompany this beautiful picture!
A lovely haiku, Gillena!
A beautiful image created in your words :)
So sweet - the picture and your words.
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A beautiful image painted in so few (wonderful) words Gillena.
Lovely!
Anna :o]
This one is pretty striking...
ZQ
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I had forgotten that this was a blue moon. Loved this Gillena.
Happy you dropped in Sarah
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tired sea ripples gently
bathers having left
The bathers must have had a raucous time, perhaps!
Hank
This is just stunning. One gets the impression of nature reclaiming this place on earth - the bathers having departed. There is a timeless quality to this haiku that is lovely and, for me, quite moving.
Lovely Haiku! I never thought of the sea longing for its own little ripples before! What a commotion we make.
Exquisite!
Beautiful image of a lovely time of day.
That day it was sooo hot driving by the beached swarmed with people it was really a busy scene. Thanks for droppjng by Hank
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Aha. Thank you for ypuf appreciation Wendy
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What lovely words and the image goes so well with them.
An effective mood piece, Gillena. While I have your attention, can you tell me the email address for the "pocket" Kukai.
Blessings, Bill K
So beautiful Gillena in word and image!
Lovely haiku <3 Happy Easter to you and keep posting your beautiful words
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Received uour submission Bill
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Thank you for your appreciation Lea
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Thank you for your appreciation and encouragement Kelly
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The image of the "tired sea" reminds me of my own weariness at the end of yet another school year. Looking forward to summer vacation!
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