chilly winds -
the colours of Autumn dance
their final whirls
© gillena cox
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[image courtesy Carpe Diem]
fusion haiku
moon over the water -
scooping up a handful
holding its light
© gillena cox
troiku formed from fusion haiku
holding its light
even the rocks hold sway
under its brilliance
scooping up a handful -
the night sea ripples
cool over my hands
moon over the water -
driving home to their future
the new bride and groom
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Blog hopping with Carpe Diem
#1546 Abstract Autumn
PROMPT: AUTUMN ABSTRACT ART BELOW
AND
#1545 The Water Fowl (crossroads)
PROMPT 3 haiku from which to form a fusion haiku
the water-fowl
pecks and shivers
the moon on the waves
© Zuiryu
scooping up the moon
in the wash bassin,
and spilling it
© Ryuho
I kept hanging the moon
on the pine tree, and taking it off,
gazing at it the while
© Hokush
REVISIT
15 November 2017
15 November 2015
15 November 2014
11 comments:
A lovely series of haiku and troiku, Gillena. I love the whirls of colour and the handful of water and light.
Thanks for your appreciation Kim
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Yes, a whirlwind!
Happy you dropped by Ken
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Beautiful imagery, Gillena...the whirl of colors, and the scoopful of coolness.
Thanks for your appreciation Lynn
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Lovely full page of troiku and haiku imbued with atmosphere. Is so interesting to read and get the feeling of the environment, and climate, and a little bit more!
Lovely haiku. Love the autumn one.
Thanks for your appreciation Hamish
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Happy you dropped by Dolores
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I love your troiku with a twist so to say, because of the interchange of the first and third line of your fusion ku. Wonderful.
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