Thursday, November 22, 2018

2360


[flower in this haiga from google dot com]


REVISED HAIKU © gillena cox
morning breeze -
dew from a flower
moistens the earth

...

murky pond -
the dew drops on the lotus
different shapes



FUSION HAIKU © gillena cox
all the dewdrops
will eventually roll off
into the pond



TROIKU: DEWDROPS © gillena cox
all the dewdrops -
sparkling diamonds on
flower and leaf

eventually rolled -
into the potted earth
dewdrops nourish

into the pond
waters merge -
no more dewdrops



Blog hopping today with

Carpe Diiem #1551
Dew Of The World (Revise That Haiku ... Hineri)

HAIKU PROMPT
koborete wa tada no mizunari beni no tsuyu

the dew of the rouge flower,
when it is spilled
is simply water
© Chiyo-Ni

hasu no ha ni kono yo no tsuyu wa magarikeri

on the lotus leaf,
the dew of this world
is distorted
© Issa

CHALLENGE
1. Revise the both haiku;
2. Create a "fusion"-haiku with the revised versions;
3. Compose a Troiku with your "fusion"-haiku.

6 comments:

Sue (this n that) said...

Beautiful - words and painting. Have a lovely day Gillena :D)

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping by Sue

Much❤love

Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr said...

Well done!

forestbather said...

So nice - you make it seem so smooth and easy!

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping by Ken

Much❤love

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Hamish

Much❤love