closing the gate -
a whispered goodnight
to a sliver of moon
© gillena cox 2019
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[As I haiku my heart today 'sliver']
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Carpe Diem
Weekend Meditation #96 Little Ones ... Sedoka
Challenge: to create another kind of Japanese poetry ... Sedoka
Sedoka: 'Good Night Moon'
closing the front gate
a sliver of moon to tell
whispers from the heart goodnight
silhouettes remain
still without the night wind
sound of the lock snapping closed
© gillena cox 2019
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19 comments:
oh wow Gillena - these are .... superb!
the very first haiku had me stopped to rights - breathless!
and your sedōka is just sublimely rapturous ... a most vivid image silver dripped into my mind's eye ... just divine .... how exceptional!
thanks for visiting and commenting (on mine) - Happy Sunday and a most generously wonderful week ahead :)
Very nice!
Wildchild, thank you for your appreciation
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Ken, thank you for your appreciation
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Cie, thanks for dropping by
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Beautiful!
I love both haiku and sedoka, Gillena! Beautiful!
Delightful haiku and love your brush painting ~ ^_^
Happy Day to You,
A ShutterBug Explores,
aka (A Creative Harbor)
Thanks for dropping by Rall
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Happy you dropped by Kim
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Thanks for dropping by Carol
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Blessings, Gillena
no onde
to saygoodnight to
a whispered prayer
the same sliver of moon called to me last night and set my heart free.
Thank you for the beautiful music and haiku Gillena, they both fit together so perfectly, like the moon in the night sky...
Short and very sweet. The sliver gets it's day.
Thanks for sharing Bill
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Ah the moon, happy you dropped by Rebecca
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Thank you for your appreciation Lea
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Thaks for your appreciation Sharon
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