Sunday, August 04, 2019

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closing the gate -
a whispered goodnight
to a sliver of moon

© gillena cox 2019


Wishing all my friends and visitors a Happy Sunday

Sunday Smiles



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BLOG HOPPING
[As I haiku my heart today 'sliver']

a weekly unfurling of tiny jubilant love


AND


Carpe Diem
Weekend Meditation #96 Little Ones ... Sedoka
Challenge: to create another kind of Japanese poetry ... Sedoka

Sedoka: 'Good Night Moon'
closing the front gate
a sliver of moon to tell
whispers from the heart goodnight

silhouettes remain
still without the night wind
sound of the lock snapping closed
© gillena cox 2019

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Sunday Lime 47
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20 comments:

WildChild47 said...

oh wow Gillena - these are .... superb!

the very first haiku had me stopped to rights - breathless!

and your sedōka is just sublimely rapturous ... a most vivid image silver dripped into my mind's eye ... just divine .... how exceptional!

thanks for visiting and commenting (on mine) - Happy Sunday and a most generously wonderful week ahead :)

Ken Gierke said...

Well done.

Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost (Not Charlotte) said...

Very nice!

Gillena Cox said...

Wildchild, thank you for your appreciation

Much❤🕊❤love

Gillena Cox said...

Ken, thank you for your appreciation

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Gillena Cox said...

Cie, thanks for dropping by

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rallentanda said...

Beautiful!

Kim M. Russell said...

I love both haiku and sedoka, Gillena! Beautiful!

carol l mckenna said...

Delightful haiku and love your brush painting ~ ^_^

Happy Day to You,
A ShutterBug Explores,
aka (A Creative Harbor)

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping by Rall

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Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Kim

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Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping by Carol

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Bill said...

Blessings, Gillena

no onde
to saygoodnight to
a whispered prayer

rebecca said...

the same sliver of moon called to me last night and set my heart free.

Lea said...

Thank you for the beautiful music and haiku Gillena, they both fit together so perfectly, like the moon in the night sky...

Sharon Wagner said...

Short and very sweet. The sliver gets it's day.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for sharing Bill

Much❤🕊❤love

Gillena Cox said...

Ah the moon, happy you dropped by Rebecca

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Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Lea

Much❤🕊❤love

Gillena Cox said...

Thaks for your appreciation Sharon

Much❤🕊❤love