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Friday, November 02, 2012

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Defining Haiku here at Lunch Break that's 30 days, November 1st - 30th of haiku features

The haiku in today's haiga(illustrated haiku)

night rain
insomnia bathed in
tears of angels

--gillena cox

Today's note long/short/long

night rain = short line
insomnia bathed in = long line
tears of angels = short line

Today's tag

Some writers still swear by this; many dont; but i think most writers agree; if you are now getting into this genre its a good structural pattern to use

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I invite you to share some of your long/short/long expertise with me


Thank you -- Adelaide for
November first
pushing us towards winter
with cold rain