new moon -
a truck roars sensing shape
into dawn quietness
© gillena cox 2018
The Chinese speak of “writing a painting” and “painting a poem.”
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32 comments:
Wonderful haiku
Nicely conjured.
There is always the sound of an engine when we least expect it.
Dawn quietness disturbed.......sigh.
You have "painted" this haiku oh so well Gillena! Thank you!
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Happy Sunday Gillena
"2620" - interesting - I wonder what would be around in the year 2620? Nature disturbed by the roar of an engine somewhere in the distance. There's a lot here in so few words.
You have certainly painted a poem here!!
Beautiful!!❤️
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Glad i sparked your interest Truedessa
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Reading this feels like waking up or starting a novel you know you're going to enjoy. :)
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Oh, this is wonderful ... the way have created a rather abstract line between the dark quiet - pierced - by the blast of dawn into a new day. Love it, Gillena.
Correction: Oops - to quick to hit the publish bar: the way you have created
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I like how the sound of the engine pierces the silence of the dawn.
I can imagine trying to distinguish betweeen reality and a dream as I awake in the morning with sounds of the day and my dreams all mingled. Great haiku Gillena.
I love the contrast of the silent new moon and the truck breaking the quietness, Gillena. Have a great week!
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You've captured it!
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