Sunday, September 09, 2018

2320



new moon -
a truck roars sensing shape
into dawn quietness

© gillena cox 2018


The Chinese speak of “writing a painting” and “painting a poem.”

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32 comments:

Jae Rose said...

Wonderful haiku

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Nicely conjured.

brudberg said...

There is always the sound of an engine when we least expect it.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Dawn quietness disturbed.......sigh.

Lea said...

You have "painted" this haiku oh so well Gillena! Thank you!

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Jae

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Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Rosemary


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Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Björn


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Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Sherry


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Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Lea


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Cressida de Nova said...

Happy Sunday Gillena

Truedessa said...

"2620" - interesting - I wonder what would be around in the year 2620? Nature disturbed by the roar of an engine somewhere in the distance. There's a lot here in so few words.

annell4 said...

You have certainly painted a poem here!!

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Beautiful!!❤️

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Cressida


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Gillena Cox said...

Glad i sparked your interest Truedessa


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Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Annell


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Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Sanaa


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C. Sandlin said...

Reading this feels like waking up or starting a novel you know you're going to enjoy. :)

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation C


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Wendy Bourke said...

Oh, this is wonderful ... the way have created a rather abstract line between the dark quiet - pierced - by the blast of dawn into a new day. Love it, Gillena.

Wendy Bourke said...

Correction: Oops - to quick to hit the publish bar: the way you have created

Gillena Cox said...

😊

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Wendy

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tonispencer said...

I like how the sound of the engine pierces the silence of the dawn.

Old Egg said...

I can imagine trying to distinguish betweeen reality and a dream as I awake in the morning with sounds of the day and my dreams all mingled. Great haiku Gillena.

Kim M. Russell said...

I love the contrast of the silent new moon and the truck breaking the quietness, Gillena. Have a great week!

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Toni

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Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Robin

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Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Kim

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Mary said...

You've captured it!

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Mary


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