dawn stillness -
silhouettes of
banana fronds
her devious plan
Caribbean mocking bird -
'Steal The Carnival'
❧✿❧
tail feathers fan
a band of white colour seen
against the grey wall
so lightly she skips
no sound from her throttle
her beak sealed tight
❧✿❧
sound of birds tweeting
just another dawn it seems
except for 'The Plan'
lingering dawn
a super moon fading
but why her smile
❧✿❧
children unawares -
glued bits of sparkle highlight
creative ideas
all the sparkle
booty for a flock of grey
all that colour too
a few words whispered
to Rainbow -
Day Moon dims to sleep
they whistle and swoop -
already the rainbow stretched
too late too late
too much colour
much too much for grey birds
startled they fall
left there in the street
under the trampling feet
of joyous children
cloud panchayat
judging meaning and colour -
children play mas
[THEN MOON SMILED: a haiku fiction sequence]
dawn stillness -
silhouettes of
banana fronds
her devious plan
Caribbean mocking bird -
'Steal The Carnival'
❧✿❧
tail feathers fan
a band of white colour seen
against the grey wall
so lightly she skips
no sound from her throttle
her beak sealed tight
children unawares -
glued bits of sparkle highlight
creative ideas
❧✿❧
sound of birds tweeting
just another dawn it seems
except for 'The Plan'
lingering dawn
a super moon fading -
but why her smile
❧✿❧
all the sparkle
booty for a flock of grey
all that colour too
❧✿❧
a few words whispered
to Rainbow
Day Moon dims to sleep
❧✿❧
they whistle and swoop -
already the rainbow stretched
too late too late
too much colour
much too much for grey birds
startled they fall
left there in the street
under the trampling feet
of joyous children
❧✿❧
cloud panchayat
judging meaning and colour -
children play mas
splendor of the sun
for the children masquerade -
shadows in the street
THEN MOON SMILED © gillena cox 2019
Last Sunday of the Season of Carnival. Next Sunday is The first Sunday in the Season of Lent
Sunday Smiles
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left there in the street
under the trampling feet
of joyous children
splendor of the sun
for the children masquerade -
shadows in the street
[Photos; from 2 Carnival Events 2019: Parade of Children Masquerade along Western Main Road St James & Sacred Heart Girls Carnival Parade at Queens Park Savannah]
REVISIT
Sunday Standard 25
Sunday Lime 25
3 March 2017
BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH
Shadow Shot Sunday 2:
Grand Old Tree
AND
Carpe Diem
#1618 Kumano Kodo ... on our way again
20 comments:
Wonderful and elegant leaf drawing ~ and great Carnival photos ~ have fun!
Happy Day to you,
A ShutterBug Explores,
aka (A Creative Harbor)
Happy you dropped by Carol
much love...
There is so much magic here! Carnival must be a wonder-filled experience.
Wonderful... and so many color in carnival...
Happy you dropped by Maggie
Much🌻love
Ah yes. Happy you dropped by Björn
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This is so beautiful Gillena, thanks so much for inviting me to look at it. Your carnival is so bright and beautiful, lovely to see the photos Here carnival is being celebrated, too, I helped a neighbour make her dress and she wore it at the parade yesterday. Hugs, Valerie
Thanks for dropping by Valerie
Much🌻love
Beautifully done.
Thanks for dropping by Taluula
Much🌻love
thoughtful.
Thanks for dropping by Stephan
Much🌻love
Colorful carnival feeling here! :)
Thanks for dropping by BLOGitse
Much🌻love
Thanks for the shadows, Gillena!
in answer to your tale of the gray mockingbird
plans gone awry
Carnival splendor remains
long after the day
Adelaide
Happy dropped by Maggie
Much🌻love
Nice one Adelaide. Happy you dropped by
Much🌻love
So well done and fun to read. Have a ball!
cloud panchayat
judging meaning and colour -
children play mas
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