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clouds drift
an intake of morning breath
i am
the universe
unfathomable span
a speck of dust
and there was light
vaster the mind of God
a thought revealed
bird songs
a choir of difference stirring
through winds
grandmother
a tryst with contemplation
haiku willed
when the sunlight
sieves through tomorrow
mysteries appear
-- gillena cox
Revisit
to poem
hair and now
lightness
Poetry Jam the prompt is "identity"
28 comments:
Ah, each of us is part of the 'universe,' aren't we? And there are so many 'mysteries' that make up each of us in our existence. Though we are a 'speck of dust' we are important in the 'mind of God.'
thank you Mary for your appreciation
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Very interesting take on the prompt which suggests that even though we are all individual really are just a small part of the family of man.
Beyond beautiful Gillena, wow and bravo
thank you for your appreciation Elaine
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happy you stopped by Lorraine
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every image here has its own beauty and importance..beautifully captivated Gillena :)
nice linked haiku...and an exploration of our place and identity in the universe...and in relation to our higher powers....cool write gilena
Thank you Sumana
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Thank you Brian
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this is so full of little gems, that created heavenly masters hand in each of us, well captured,
I like the way you used the form to convey individual images that then shape the whole. And I agree that, in the end, who we are is still a bit mysterious.
Thank you for your appreciation Alan
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Thank you for your appreciation Gabriella
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I enjoyed the style of this with the linked haikus that explore is a broad sense the question of who we are. Specks of dust indeed.
"and there was light" - ah, all the better to see ourselves, the "specks of dust"!
Wonderful!
Greetings from Germany
Your images remind me of times in Trinidad's rain forest. I love the final verse and the sunlight seiving through tomorrow.
that's heavenly composition, intriguing and beautiful
Identity
fallen leaf
who has seen
the wind . . .
This is absolutely beautiful. I love how you place yourself in the midst of this wondrous universe. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
Thank you for your appreciation Peggy
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◕‿◕｡) Happy you dropped in Donna
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Happy you dropped in Mascha
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Thank you Cifar
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thank you for sharing Bill
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Lovely, Gillena. Puts the individual aspect of ourselves firmly within the grander scheme of things!
Thank you for your appreciation Nicholas
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