Thursday, November 08, 2012

1050

Defining Haiku here at Lunch Break that's 30 days, November 1st - 30th of haiku features

The haiku in today's haiga(illustrated haiku)

a gentle rain -
deepening green of broccoli
in boiling water

--gillena cox

Today's note - juxtaposition

teaming of two images in such a way as to present a poetic aesthetic

a gentle rain = image 1; this can call to mind all sorts of emotive experiences in the reader
deepening green of broccoli in boiling water = image 2; a bit of surprise to the reader, deepening the poetic essence of the instant shared

I invite you to share some of your juxtaposition expertise with me


Today's tag

SmileyCentral.com

Labels: , , , ,

6 Comments:

Blogger Geraldine said...

Oh, I like it!

3:37 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

thank you Geraldine, glad you stopped by


much love...

4:37 AM  
Blogger Lorraine said...

oh indeed I might just start to like broccoli

4:45 AM  
Blogger Frank... said...

A very nicely designed haiga, Gillena...

9:22 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Lorraine good and healthy too : )


much love...

10:54 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Frank; thank you, glad you stopped by



much love...

10:55 AM  

Post a Comment

<< Home