Thursday, November 15, 2012

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Defining Haiku here at Lunch Break that's 30 days, November 1st - 30th of haiku features

The haiku in today's haiga(illustrated haiku)

spindly pink
under a pomerac tree
blossom fall

--gillena cox


Today's note - pivot

spindly pink
under a pomerac tree

under a pomerac tree
blossom fall

Line 2 = the pivot line

sometimes a word or line acts metaphorically, or plays like a pun, in haiku this is pivoting; since the genre stays away from the western style tools of metaphor, simile and such like


I invite you to share some of your expertise on pivot with me

Today's tag

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2 Comments:

Blogger Lorraine said...

Gorgeous and oh so romantic :)

6:03 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Glad you stopped by Lorraine


much love...

3:57 PM  

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