The haiku in today's haiga(illustrated haiku)
spindly pink
under a pomerac tree
blossom fall
--gillena cox
Today's note - pivot
spindly pink
under a pomerac tree
under a pomerac tree
blossom fall
Line 2 = the pivot line
sometimes a word or line acts metaphorically, or plays like a pun, in haiku this is pivoting; since the genre stays away from the western style tools of metaphor, simile and such like
I invite you to share some of your expertise on pivot with me
Today's tag
2 comments:
Gorgeous and oh so romantic :)
Glad you stopped by Lorraine
much love...
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