temporary view
aloof stands the mocking bird -
a wholesome pastime
© gillena cox 2015
temporary aloof whole
obedient to the sway of morning those dawn birds chipper at chirping
first a morning prayer raspy voice of a grackle on awakening
caught in somber thoughts each day break a call to amazement of light
© gillena cox 2015
Obedient Raspy Somber
23 comments:
This made me think of the difference between waking up slowly and waking up quickly - i think i would choose the first option!
I enjoyed reading that, really lovely.
happy you dropped in Blogoratti
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This is absolutely adorable!
Such a delightful read :D
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Thanks Sanaa
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If she stood still for just long enough to click that snap, it's worth it :) Loved both the click and the poem. :)
Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason
Apt description of the mockers!!
I'm impressed that you were able to use all three words in one brief verse!
Thanks for dropping in Vinay
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thanks for your appreciation Maggie
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happy you dropped in Sue
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Mockingbird, crow or blackbird, I'd still prefer one of them to the alarm clock!
oh so beautiful, Gillena, he can mock me anytime lol
thanks for dropping in Robin
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Lorraine, happy you dropped by
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these are beautiful
A bit of a show-off these birds seem to portray. Impressive in brevity, Gillena. All 3 in one haiku!
Hank
Wonderfull bird,greeting from Belgium
thanks for dropping in Sheilagh
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happy you dropped in Hank. yes they are, you should see them fan their white tipped tails, really pretty
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welcome to Lunch Break Louisette
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I can sense being mocked.
On happy you dropped in J
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