tranquility reigns
ethereal, there are sounds
locked in smooth round stones
here the poui blooms
intensly pink or truly
globs of midas gold
don't look down that slope
bottomless in destiny; farmers
tend christophene vines
thicker than the stalks
Jack dared climb for merely
a giant's fortune
shadowy spirals
i vanish into morning
still gasping for breath
--gillena cox
Revisit
waking
and words
flutter
Poetry Jam the prompt is "dream"
29 comments:
Dreams give us faith and hope and sometimes fortune too!! like Jack found.
Shadowy spirals - love that line, just want to close my eyes and dream.
Loved "there are sounds
locked in smooth round stones".
Excellent description of the feeling of a dream. I like the images you used in this.
happy you dropped in Alan
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Thank you Donna
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Thank you Peggy
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shadowy spirals
i vanish into morning
still gasping for breath
I liked these last lines exactly what happens after a dream experience.
You have described so well the dreamlike state....and I especially like the image of the shadowy spirals...
Great use of imagery in your poem Gillena!
you've expressed dream so beautifully, what it is made of & how it breaks up with such wonderful imagery...i specially love the shadowy spirals..great lines Gillena..
You are surrounded by a lot of tropical beauty. It shows:)
Wow Gillena that was, magical, beautiful atta girl! wow
Thank you for your appreciation Elaine
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Happy you dropped in Mary
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Thank you Gabriella
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Thank you for your appreciation Sumana
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How beautiful that is. Great job.
Very dreamy poem. The first one is so beautiful. I love the last stanza.
fantastic dream description, nicely written
Let Them Be Children
thank you Reit
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Happy you dropped in Myrna
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Thank you for your appreciation Cifar
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Absolutely beautiful images! The spiraling effect of your words make this very special!
Thank you for your appreciation MaryAnn
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A suitably dreamy poem for the prompt, Gillena. I enjoyed reading this!
thank you Nicholas
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