yellow butterfly
passing yellow ixoras
yesterday's watching
of its freedom to pass by
not stopping for a visit
today writing of
that butterfly passing by
its yellow colour
observation clings
to the chance of being here
not somewhere else
where no flowers are blooming
no yellow butterflies fly
coincidence lurks
In the yellow sameness of
sunshine and flowers
GARDEN LIMINAL- A RENGAY © gillena cox 2021
Weekly Scribblings #67: Liminal Space
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REVISIT
28 April 2016
28 April 2014
30 comments:
Here, and not somewhere else, is all we have.
I love the anchor of the colour yellow. Vibrant piece.
i like the way the repetitions are also changes
Thank you for your appreciation Maggie
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Thank you for your appreciation Brother Ollie
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Beautiful illustration !
Lovely work well done.
Like a burst of sunshine!
your poetry always makes me smile, so beautifully written. loving all that yellow as well! xo
How lovely to watch the butterfly on its path
It is always good to visit and read your poetry Gillena.
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I love this explosion of yellow!
I love the way yellow shines brightly throughout your poem,
Gillena, and the yellow liminal space in the lines:
‘coincidence lurks
In the yellow sameness of
sunshine and flowers’.
Missing butterflies make us wonder, they can fly across the Gulf of Mexico to us, but after they lay eggs they die. Who teaches the baby butterfly after being larva where to go next?
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Beautifully penned. Indeed, may we always have butterflies and flowers.
Oh, I thought my earlier comment hadn't posted! Not only posted but answered, I see. Never mind, you can have two this time!
Lovely work, my friend.
Thank you for your appreciation Sim
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Thank you for your appreciation Kim
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Nice ponder JIM. Thank you for your appreciation
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Always happy that you drop by Rosemary
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Thank you for dropping by Taluula
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Simply beautiful, Gillena!
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